Monday, November 23, 2009

Dead Dreams (2nd Edition)

He thought he was lucky,
Lying on her lap
Savouring the ice-cream
She was feeding him,
He dreamt about marriage,
Children and so on.
Suddenly his heart stopped beating,
It was but too late for him
To realise that he was poisoned.

(The first post on my blog. Being republished ...hey! not due to lack of ideas..common.)


tunafish said...

@Old Monk
Sounds so Shakespeare :)

Gyanban said...


1. use

2.Just for a split second my mind went back to the Haagen Dazs I was devouring yesterday night..with not so friendly people.!

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

ahh... interesting idea :-)

Old Monk said...

Thanks a lot for the compliment.

Old Monk said...

I was trying to do something new. Happy that you enjoyed the lines.

Old Monk said...

Please do not try it.
I have been off blogging for the past few days. Please do keep visiting.

V Rakesh said...

Phew, that jolted hard! I've been away from your blog for a long time now and truly missed it. Hope you are doing good. Wishing you and folks a merry Christmas and a very happy new year!

Old Monk said...

Thanks a lot. Off blogging for the past few days. Keep visiting. I am getting ready with something new.

Old Monk said...

Wishing all my viewers and readers 'A VERY HAPPY AND PROSPEROUS NEW YEAR'. Let us all pray (Its either PRAY or PREY) and fight for peace.

Lena said...

that was so mean to him. I wish it had a happy ending instead!